Word Work

Here is the word work i did yesterday, I tried to use the words to make words into a story.

Superhero Writing - The Egyptian “ Queen “

The Egyptian “ Queen “

Do you want to know how Ella got her powers? Well this is how….

It all began when 6 year old Ella & her family went to Egypt to see

the pyramids…They flew from Los Angeles to Egypt then went on a bus

to the pyramids. When they exited the bus door and their shoes touched

the dusty sand. A wonderful view of pyramids they saw. Little Ella trailed

away from the group wandering off. A few meters away was her family

not knowing that Ella had gone…

Ella found a huge, tall thing, it was a Egyptian sphinx with an open door.

She walked inside the hole, now some kids would be scared but Ella was

very brave & curious. Inside was just plain sand on the ground,

weird drawings and everything looked like it was 1000 years old.

She saw one design that was very interesting like it was calling her to

come closer. She tapped the picture, it slowly moved back.

She trembled moving back steadily then she tripped on a rock and

fainted.

When she woke up there was no sphinx, there was just sand,

did she just fall asleep on the sand? No way she did, it was still midday,

why would she just sleep on the sand for? Ella heard a beat of wings

behind her, what could it be?

She was frozen solid for a while she rotated around unhurriedly,

it was a sphinx! “ You have freed my from my curse,

now I must give you something in return “ says the sphinx.

Ella stood there and listened. The sphinx had given her a

crook & a flail in return. Ella thanked the sphinx then the sphinx

soared through the air. She wondered what the crook & flail does…

She imagined that it would give her flying power. She held it and

turned them both diagonally, a brightness of light shot up in the air.

She floated up into the sky, she gasped. She flew back behind the bus,

landing down, she went into the bus storing it into her suitcase.

That is how she got her powers!

Extra:

Her sister caught a glimpse of her exiting the bus, she said

” Have you been in the bus all day?” “ Uhm, yes --“, Ella says.

“ Aww, that’s bad, it was really fun on the tour “. Emily started whispering

`` I-i ‘’accidentally’’ `` touched an artifact that had a bad curse,

but you don’t think I'll get cursed? Right?”“ Okay...“, Ella nods. 

                             Or does she?

Dream Pond

There was a pond not just any type of pond a special pond. No one knows where it is, or knows what it was called. Except for one person, a young girl, named Isabella who loved adventure! So it all began when she was on a school trip, a camping trip just for a day and back. Do you want to know how she found the pond? Well here’s why! She left her camp tent, leaving her friends. So there she was adventuring outside but then…. she tripped over something, but what?

She had found out she had got knocked by something. Critters were  chittering, chattering, above her while she was unconscious…

When she woke up, she was in a pond. “ Ughh, where am I? Now i'm officially soaked, she sulks. She exits and turns magically dry. “ What!? “. The critters come to the rescue surrounding Isabella. Another thing you have to know about her is that she loves animals, any type! Literally like cats, dogs, even odd creatures, dragons, unicorns. “ Hello there!”, in a pitch voice a chipmunk says. “ Aaah!”, screams Isabella, “ How can you talk!?”

“Well, you have been woken up in a pond right?“. “ Uhm, yes? What does that have to do with this?” “In our land, the legend is the person who comes out dry is our leader”. “ Wait, you’ve gotta be kidding me…”

“ Nope, you are our leader now!”. “ Really?” “Yes!” “ Ugrhhh, i feel dizzy”.

“ Huh, what happened?” “ Huh, must just been a dream...” Or has it?...

Thank you for reading this blog post! There is a picture but it is currently at school. I'm not sure if I can post it.

Hard Luck Pt4

Hmm, maybe, I could just stop for a minute…

I hop right off the floor and go outside. I see a hotdog stand! Perfect! I go there and order a hotdog. I checked the price…..

I don’t have enough I just noticed. “ Uhm “, I said nervously. “ Hurry up and pay “, says the the hotdog owner. I see how much I have. I gave him all my money. “ Not enough “ says annoyed. He leaves. [ Sigh ]  I should go back to my station.

[ Slip ]  “ Wow, just great”. I slipped on a banana peel. I crashed into the hotdog cart as well. “ Urgh “. I lift myself up.

I go straight back to the factory. I hope nothing bad happens….

Hard Luck Pt3

I had the most dirtiest station on land! If there was dirt factory, mine would still dirtier than the most dirtiest there!

I can’t believe i’m still here! Well, not really. I’ve been fired tones of times, except that my friend Hayley keeps making excuses for me. She’s the boss’s auntie’s sister’s grandparent’s niece’s cousin’s friend. She doesn’t work in a dirty sew machine though, she lives in a clean electric sewing machine.

Life is really hard for me - I have to even my own equipment! I hold a piece of fabric and start sewing, with my hands - I don’t have the normal ones. But the fun is that I get to try the old fashion way to sew. So there I am sewing, endlessly.

I see everyone enjoying themselves. But what about me? Plus they are not even sewing properly, like me, like the olden days.

Hard Luck Pt2

So, I had to walk to work. It took me, like an hour. “ Ugh “, I groan. 
[BRISHHH] [ ZAP ]  “Great”. “  Rain and lightning“. I came in soaking 
wet. My boss came out from his office. He had a very angry look on his 
face… 

“ WHO ARE YOU TO COME IN MY FACTORY!”. “Uhm, i’m a worker 
here”, I whispering nervously. “ Oh… go to the bathroom, clean yourself,
#clean the floor then GO BACK TO WORK!”. [ Sigh ] As go to the 
bathroom trying to dry myself. I take a mop and dry the entrance 
floor which is where I left a lot of water soaking on the floor. I touched 
the floor. It was really soggy. I tried to use the mop to get the water 
out. 

“ Haven’t you finished yet! I said you should take 1 minute!”. 
“ But, but, i-i-i “. “ No excuses, hurry up and sew”. I put a wet floor sign
and I went back to my station. Station number 13...

Hard Luck Pt1 - Made Up Story

I slowly woke up heading for the back door and took a step out to feel the cold breeze, literally, it was really cold. I rush back in.

I sleepily brushed my teeth and I checked on my phone and noticed that I was late for work! I stupidly thought it was Saturday, when it was Monday! I rushed out of the bathroom and packed my briefcase with my paperwork. I showered quickly as I could and combed my hair. “Agh!” I got it stuck in a tangle. I tried to pull it out. I certainly did not want to cut it. I really struggled to get it out… [Rip] “ Aaaaah!” I shrieked. “Whyyyy”, I wailed, a long piece of my hair was gone.

 I went to the car to start the engine, [Brmm brmm], it went. For some reason - it sounded like it was coughing, kinda like it was not working. I open the front lid [Brrmrmrmm], smoke came of the car, [ Fling ] [ Pop ]  What is wrong now, I thought. Something was deflating. I saw a tire pop. ‘’Ugh’’, how am I supposed to get to work now?